The following sentence was written by a student from 1N1'2010 in a recent Essay Test. Amend the sentence to make it grammatically correct without its intended meaning changed.
If your game is popular, the amount of disk you sell will come back to you but in a percentage of the amount been sell but if your game doesn't sell well it will be difficult for you to advance onward.
Sunday, February 7, 2010
English Corrections
Posted by Mr Nicholas Lim at 04:34
Labels: BBSS, BBSS 2010 1N1, English Language Education
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if your games was popular,the amount of disk you sold would come back to you but in a percantage of th amount been sold.but if your game does'nt sell well,it would be difficult for you to advance onward.
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